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    Post  Grimmjow Jaggerjack Thu Jul 23, 2009 5:33 pm

    OK, finally thought of a hollow/arrancar, and maybe i will do a shinigami as well, to have a character in each world XP

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    Post  NatioShakou Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:41 pm

    So far i think its good but there is always room for improvement. I think that you should elaborate on Shikabane's personallity. Describe what a "typical playboy" looks like. I might have a clue but others, not so much. I also think you should descirbe zanpakuto more. You also said that he doesnt remember much off his past but he manages to remeber wondering around and eating hollows and shinigami. Try bulding on that as part of your history. Final tip just proff read. I caught a few things but as of that, everything is just peachy.
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    Post  Grimmjow Jaggerjack Fri Jul 24, 2009 7:37 am

    OK, i was writing that pretty late so my brain was not working as it should XP and now i just woke up, so as soon as i can think straight i will add some stuff...
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    Post  Grimmjow Jaggerjack Sat Jul 25, 2009 2:49 pm

    OK, I added the stuff as promised, but only one question, how can a arrancar be made?? The only way i have thought of is by using a "flashback where Aizen is still making arrancar, but well, that's up to you...
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    Post  Demi Ryu Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:18 pm

    A powerful enough hollow can tear off their mask and gain shinigami powers, aka, a zanpakuto. That's about all there is to it. The Espada that Aizen controls are natural Arrancar.
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    Post  Grimmjow Jaggerjack Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:50 pm

    Hum hum, now everything makes sense XD And as i said, everything about the character is done, and as always, if you find anything wrong, (about adding more stuff to the personality, i can't think of anything else >_<)
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    Post  NatioShakou Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:37 pm

    So far so good. I really like it but two little things. I thinks you should add more to Shikabane's personallity. Also, you cant just summon your zanpakuto it has to be on your person.The zanpakuto is a part of him like all Shinigami and Arrancar. Hehe after all of that your should be all done. ^-^
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    Post  Grimmjow Jaggerjack Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:37 am

    OK, re-edited, hope you like it this time, and that you understand the "sumoning" (couldn't find any better word, but it's not exactly summon,since the sword is already there) of the zampakutoh
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