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    Grimmjow Jaggerjack
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    Post  Grimmjow Jaggerjack Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:05 pm

    I haven't think too many things about this one, so i will edit whenever i think of more things to add.

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    Edit: OK, almost done, only need a RP example...


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    Demi Ryu
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    Post  Demi Ryu Mon Aug 03, 2009 4:34 pm

    No copying other Shinigami's Zanpakuto. It's not a very creative power and has too many applications that can lead to godmoding.
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    Post  Grimmjow Jaggerjack Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:44 am

    Sorry, didn't saw this reply XP i will change it and add more stuff when i can...
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    Post  Demi Ryu Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:27 pm

    No dual Zanpakutos for this reason. The anime and manga state that very few Dual Zanpakutos exist, and that if they do exist they are very very old and very powerful.

    Secondly, I'm not too crazy about the Zanpakuto Spirit... I'm on the fence with the... Molesting thing...

    Describe Shikai with more detail. Tell me how it works, you are being very vague.


    Bankai is allowed to have 1 ability that can be used at first. List that ability under Bankai Description, then put the others under Bankai Abilities. You cannot access the others at first. Give them names, space them out and make it cleaner.

    You really need to beef the entire app up really, but these are just areas that I noticed in need of comments.
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    Post  Grimmjow Jaggerjack Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:53 pm

    Were do they say that about dual swords?? I've just re-read that part, and the only say they are rare...And in any case, in one moment or another, those sword must have been "born", and any zampakutoh can be extremely powerfull with time, for example, Genryusai's zampakutoh is stronger than Kyoraku's and Ukitake's....
    And why so crazy about molesting?? It's not for real, so who cares?? And it's not like she can't defend herself against a molester, and being her zampakutoh's spirit, it means she is also a lesbian (or at least bi), even though she doesn't says so...
    And about The shikai, what else do you want me to say?? It's like Zangetsu's hability, it's really simple, instead of a blade of reiatsu, a blade of air...

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